Lane Robins ([info]lanerobins) wrote,
@ 2009-03-11 11:19:00
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Beasts.
The draft of the pet project is done.  100,000 words of modern knights, mayhem and romance: the Noble Beasts.  It's ugly--the last quarter was written at speed, more sketched than illustrated.  It's incoherent--plot threads snarl, snap, and start out of nowhere.  It's a blank 'verse--the world-building comes and goes, mostly goes.  But it's done.  And my big thing, the main character's emotional arc, is solid and there.  So I'm content.

I'm also a little at a loss.

This has been a pet project for multiples of years.  I sketched the first character outlines over the holidays in 2005.  Committed the first chapters (which all need to be cut or drastically reworked) to paper in the summer of 2006.  It's been a good friend, the go to pleasure writing when every thing else got to be a little too much like work.  And now it's done, and I'm not ready for it to be done.  For one thing, I have to decide: revise, try to turn it into something worth selling?  Or accept that I've made something utterly fun, probably unmarketable, and just set it aside?  But mostly, I have to find a new pet project.  Something long-running.  Something that won't suffer too much from being set aside time and time again.  Something that is always coaxing me to pick it up.  Oh, and something with a high proportion of slushy romance.  Just 'cause.  My first instinct is the happy spaceopera with psychics that I've dabbled my toes into, expanding on the character of Fairman Greg deWildt, last seen roaming around in the Phobos anthology All The Rage This Year.  I like Greg, like him enormously, and oh, does he have a traumatic history. . . .  But in a lot of ways the Fairmen world is only a sidestep away from the Beasts, and I have this thing about always moving forward. 

3 years there's been a tiny voice agitating in my brain, working away on the Beasts, a familiar murmur.  And now it's quiet.  Weird.  Sometimes finishing a book is a little like a loss.  Something you've given away.  Best to fill that hole again.

So far the likely candidates are:
More Beasts, write a second book, using a different POV character.  Lethal, blonde, petite.  With a secret.  
Psychic space cops!  Really, crime & romance with telepathy, what's not to like?  Did I mention alien lovers?
A chick-lit thing about an accidental arsonist and the fire fighter who loves her.  (Do I even know HOW to write chicklit?  No.  Would it turn into a story about a pyrokinetic who burns things down?  Most likely.  Would it be interesting/fun?  Maybe/maybe not but it'd be something different for me to try.)

In the meantime, there are work things to do.  3 stories so I can attend the CSSF workshop in June.  The revisions for Sylvie 2.  The new actual book; political mayhem and enemies in love.  There's a whole world I've barely started thinking about there.  It's not like I won't be busy.  But life is just more fun with a pet project to fall back on.


Just finished reading: The Suspicions of Mr Whicher.  Eyeing my bookshelf warily for the next selection. 


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[info]lazy_iris
2009-03-11 05:37 pm UTC (link)
Slushy romance!!!!! And revise it--this fan wants to see it published :-) Maybe it'll turn into a pet favorite for all your readers. The hardest thing for me is to fix a broken emotional arc, so if you've got that down, other revisions are totally feasible.

:-D

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[info]lanerobins
2009-03-13 05:35 am UTC (link)
I am totally with you on the broken emotional arc. I've got a short story I'm wrestling with. The events are fine, but the character arc? Not. And it's made the rest of the story so screwy I'm just going to have to start over. Oh well, I'll just think of it as a really thorough revision. :)

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[info]l_prieto
2009-03-11 08:23 pm UTC (link)
I'm all for revising it. I LOVE Beasts :)

As to what to write next; sequel? :)

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[info]lanerobins
2009-03-13 05:39 am UTC (link)
Yay! Beasts love! I will revise it, but since this is the pet project, I have the luxury of letting it sit for a couple of weeks, letting me "forget" what I wrote so I'll come to the revisioning fresher. Makes it so much easier to find the plot gaps, etc, if you can't recall what you INTENDED to put on the page. You just get to deal with what's actually there.

And speaking of sequels--is Ergot going to have one? Pretty please?

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[info]l_prieto
2009-03-13 05:44 am UTC (link)
I've been treating myself by reading it during breaks away from the WIP. I remember loving it, but I'd forgotten how awesome it is. I LOVE this story :) I've talked about it so much that my room mate keeps stealing glances at it (she's hooked now too :).

Thanks for asking :) Yes, Ergot is going to have a sequel. I'm thinking that it'll be about Blaise.

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[info]matthewsrotundo
2009-03-11 10:38 pm UTC (link)
Congrats on your first draftage!

And hell, yes, revise it and get it out there.

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[info]lanerobins
2009-03-13 05:41 am UTC (link)
Thanks! It feels really good to get it done. I'll revise it, but whether it goes out depends on the markets, I think! I'm not as good as you are at getting things out, but I try!

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[info]l_prieto
2009-03-13 05:46 am UTC (link)
After you've revised it, I promise to ask you if you've sent it out :)

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[info]matthewsrotundo
2009-03-18 02:14 am UTC (link)
whether it goes out depends on the markets, I think!

No, it depends on you, Ms. Published Novelist. Git 'r done! :-)

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